Breathe in, breathe out
Keep on breathing
This life will be over
Soon enough
I can’t leave yet
Breathe in, breathe out
I say this over and over
In my head
When life gets hard
Breathe in, breathe out
I will be okay
Life could be worse
I still have my family
Breathe in, breathe out
Don’t stop breathing
Just stop crying
I’m ok alone
I don’t need friends
Breathe in, breathe out
Happiness can’t be far
One day I’ll find it
I’m not dying
Just breathe in and out
Author notes
hey people sorry this poem isn't gr8 but meh
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ISN'T GREAT?!?!? What do you mean 'not great'? I love it! It is amazing! I love the repetition of 'breath in breath out'. The whole concept was great too. It flows nicely and well, I just love it. It is a great write, Amriah. I'm glad I got the opertunity to read some more of your works. ^^.
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sometimes that is all you are capable of doing.
Just breathe in and breathe out, I love that.
and I love the hopefullness you put near the end,
that happiness can't be far.
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