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One Night Creates A Life-Long Fear

As the tears fall from my once bright eyes
You stumble through the door.
My heart starts racing as you walk up to me
And then I hit the floor.

You yell Get Up as you grab my arm
And pull me to my feet.
You start to scold me, scream at me
Already, I start to feel weak.

You hit me once, you hit me twice,
As if you want me dead,
And as you do you yell at me,
Then you say it’s time for bed.

At first I’m relieved and I let myself think
The bed time means the end
But we walk straight past my room, to yours
Then I start to comprehend.

I start to shake and cry again
You tell me to hide my sorrow.
You say if I can do that well,
I’ll make it to tomorrow.

I bite my lip and walk into your room
You follow me into the darkness.
As I stand shaking you shut the door,
And now I pledge my death wish.

You lift me up onto your bed
And you undo your pants.
You tell me to be a good girl
‘cause I only get one chance.

xXxXxXx

The last thing I remember is you on top of me.
Then I took a deep breath and closed my eyes.
The rest is buried in shame.
  I can’t bear to look at you.
My life, is now your game...

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 29, 2007

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    G'Day mate

    Oh whoa. The way you have written this had me deep in tears. I am sorry you had to endure that. You are very strong by posting this.

    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~AJ


  • TwilightDazzles
    November 27, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry

    The emotional aspect of this is strong. The fear is apparant in the way you write. Thanks for this heartwrenching entry and I wish you the best in this contest

  • lost-on-the-inside
    November 24, 2007
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    ooooh you have left me speach less. i love the flow of this piece. i can see what you are talking about. i'm so sorry about this i am.
    great job


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    March 11, 2007
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