the truth is the rain
streaming down my roof at night
singing me to sleep.
A contest entry
- "BLISSFUL..." :) Short Poem Contest... by Harrisham Minhas.
380 points, ended March 24, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rainy Day Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended November 10, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Perfect image, beautifully realized. Well done.
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Ahh nothing better than the sound of rain on the roof while you are laying in bed, lovely imagery, goodluck in the contest
Karen -
The truth is, the Rain can sing me to sleep. I just love how the Rain is romantic in its' various ways. Good luck in the Rain Haiku Contest!
Ted E
PS: Calling ALL Rain Lovers: a group has been started for you:
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/I%20Truly%20Love%20The%20Rain
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the truth is the rain
streaming down my roof at night
singing me to sleep.
I like the thoughts within your haiku, L3-the raindrops do make a lovely song that sends you to sleep happily. Well done!
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What a delightful haiku - full of the purest imagery.
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Refreshing!
Very true!
I love the rains and they give me a feeling of serenity...
Here you have depicted the sound of rain falling on your roof , singing you to sleep...wonderful!
Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest!
Be Serene,
Spread Peace,
Harrisham Minhas.
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