Grey is my world since you went away
Returned to the forest whence you came
Alone I remember those bright blessed days
When love blossomed in my heart
For then there was colour and my life was bright
For then I could love you and be free
Now trapped in my memory
A love lost forever
I’ll never forget your smile
Outside of my lonliness
The world carries on
And love blossoms as a forest and the trees
Sing of beauty and dreams that I don’t have
Since you left me
I’m not loved and I’m not free
Author notes
Huzzah
A contest entry
- It's all about the mystery, life is! by S2ndQueen.
450 points, ended April 20, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lynnkte
you could have done a little better put you some more thought into it
i would have gave you a B
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Now I know?
Your heart because of love lost and memories you wish to relive and dream upon.Slowly your heart to turn to stone,and the brick walls to rise for you wish to never let go of what once was.
So sad to lose a heart as yours that has so many tomorrows to love again.
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Keith
Thank you so much for your comment
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I think you did a wonderful job here
And your ending is just great...
I'm not loved and I'm not free....
Good luck in this contest,
XXJeannette
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wolf mistress
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