Life then was scary, today
great tomorrow will be perfect with mom and dad
by my side.
Life then was a burden, today
a blessing, tomorow calm with
mom and dad leaching me!
Life then was caotic, today
thought out, tomorrow calm with
mom and dad teaching me!
With mom and dad
by my side
life tomorrow will be better
than today
and never like life then!
by flyingangel15
A contest entry
- Looking For An AP Family by Antebellum.
475 points, ended February 13, 12 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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what a hopeful write
liked it alot
and why don't you send emails at group?
I miss your emails
how are you?
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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i know i haven't sent emails in a while.... work has got me out of whack lol.. just been so busy... I will send some just as soon as i get a chance... I am doing.. .the bf and i just broke up so i am kinda down and out right now but i will be fine... how are you
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Oh, what happened? why broke up?
imfine.. just too tired
anyway.. whats up? have you added me on msn? -
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he is still in love with his ex and wants to give her another chance... told him to go ahead but i won't be a side toy... he had to choose who he wanted and he chose her...... I lost .... I don't have msn.... I need an intervention lol
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That is good!
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I know it's been up for a while. I just didn't get around to reading it...But I like it a bunch. It's very honest. Great job!
<3 Jenerali -
This is very sweet. It sounds like you are very happy. That's what's important. Good write. I liked it a lot.
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I love this poem you penned here, life is always greater as long as we have mom and dad to share it with. Well written dear poet
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I like it..
I would just work on your flow a little bit. -
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thanks guys!
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