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A Dying Love

Was our love dying or could we keep holding on
What do you do when you give your heart to someone new 
Every things great except for your age
But they will understand is all you can say
In reality you know that not true
But for it to last just one more day
You'll tell yourself anything to keep going on
Maybe it will work
Maybe they'll see
None of this will happen apearently
But just to make it last this is what you'll say
He tells you everything will be ok
And nothing could be more real
Then the way that the both of you feel
He tells you he loves you and will till his dying day
But still you wonder will he move on
Will he find someone better than you
Have they succeded in tearing you apart
Can they keep they love you share from having a start
Thoughs he says your the only one on his mind
You look and look
Searching to find that feeling so real
It's so hard when you can't talk and you feel like your falling apart
Each momnet you wonder is our love dying or can we keep holding on
We've made it this far
A year and a half
Why now would it hold us back
Love is one of the best feelings in the world
But at this moment it's nothing your wishing for
The pain that comes when they say you just can't be with him
It will never work is what they say
How do they know
They wont let it be
And if they don't let you find out
Your going to wonder till your dying day
Was our love dying or could we keep holding on

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  • Bethie
    March 12, 2007

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    Good emotion coming through on this one. Such a struggle for you guys. If it's good (which is seems to be) then keep on, keepin' on..