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Amanda

A-a long time since iv loved like this
M-maybe we will grow old together
A-and have a few kids
N-never fall out of love
D-die in each others arms
A-and be reborn again and love again

Love you lots
Count Crimson Avarus

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  • CherylAnn
    August 4, 2007

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    Awwww Beautiful

    Such a beautiful Acrostic,sweet and filled with so much love...Makes my heart melt as I am sure it will make her heart melt also...
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~


  • Archimedes Aleph
    April 17, 2007
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    awwwww

    aww you sap u call me and keith bad you butt poo Love ya lotz


  • Dragon Aleph
    March 27, 2007
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    Tis nice

    I think your turning into a sap like me though lol. Though you did misspell I've I'm not gonna give you to much grief about it....Over all it's good, however on the last line:

    A-and be reborn again and love again
    I think I would have left out the first again. Anyways good job


  • Shade Aurelia
    March 18, 2007
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    I'm speechless, my love. Imagine me, speechless. I can say that I'm honored to know that we feel the same (except for having kids. lmao, joking). And i would give anything to die in your arms when I'm old.

    I love you, now and forever.
    Shade


  • L. J. Arien
    March 11, 2007
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    oops forgot applause


  • L. J. Arien
    March 11, 2007
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    a long time? i thought you had never been in love before???
    cute poem ^.^


  • BlueIsisQueenRaven
    March 10, 2007
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    ~Many scarlet kisses and bites~

    Pure perfection of a love one would give anything for. I simply adored this my brother. May you indeed be together for all time and have what you want with one another. You deserve it.

    I loved this poem. Made me breathlessly fall in love with the words.

    Lady Blue~

    Your sister~


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 10, 2007
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    how sweet!
    I don't think i have ever read a love poem for you, all dark and vampiric stuff lol. But really I love this one, it is so sweet and cute.

    Keep on writing, and hope you two will be happy,
    Nooni

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