I sit and reflect my thoughts
I want so bad for him to hold me in his arms
They say what we are isn't right
We can't stop our feelings so why put up the fight
I love him so much he's nothing like the rest
If given the chance I know we'd pass the test
All he wants is to be there for me
But no one will open their eyes and see
Statistics say this
These papers say that
But it's my life there's no holding back
I want to be with him
But my chances their taking
I'll never willingly stop loving him
In my mind he'll stay till my last breathing day
I'll always wonder what could have been
Would we have made it
Could I still be with him
We have tried our best to make it last
But with them in the way we have to hold back
They say there will be many you'll see
But that doesn't matter because he's everything to me
I've never felt this way for anyone before
I want so bad for them to see him as more
See him for everything about him I adore
I want to wake up and this all be a dream
They will open their eyes and the true him they will see
The man of my life
Because I love him
And he loves me
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this is brilliant. too good for words
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thank you so much i am gald you liked it..i will stop by your page later and read and comment on some of your work...
you can check out more of mine if you like...
love the shark
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Understandable...
Awww....sometimes there are obstacles in the way of on'e true love for another....
Impressive piece....written with such deep emotions...
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thanks so much for you comment i am gald you liked it....
love the shark
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this reminds me of me and luke....this is sad but really good...i like it alot it is very awesomeness... Heather
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thanks so much for the comment i am so gald you liked it, i hope all works well for you....
love the shark
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Aww. This is sad, but it's true when it comes to things like age difference in relationships. Or loooong distance. If people haven't done it, then it seems strange to them. Good write. And I hope everything works out well for you.
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thanks so much. it means a lot to see that some one sees where im coming from. i love this guy to death and there is an 8 year age difference but no one but us can decide weather we will make it or not....thanks again im glad you enjoyed the write.
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