Despise

Rapture my bleeding heart
shred it piece by piece
for you despise love

A contest entry

Three AMAZING lines by Lj-. 340 points, ended March 11, 2007, 32 entries
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Whoochi
March 25, 2007

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OK you KNOW i LOVE short writes and this is chilling becasue it can be so true...painful, but true....awesome point....love the few words...Good job!
tina12345
March 14, 2007
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thanks for the comment you have great poems too keep it up
mysticstorm
March 13, 2007

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How dark and deep. Amazing job, sis...in three lines.
How sadly true for so many.
Best to you!
Grey Mouser
March 10, 2007

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WOW, dark and deceiving. When a love is torn from the heart by another that cannot give that in return.
Well done and best to you int he contest.

Mouser
Lj-
March 10, 2007

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Very clear. And realistic.

good write.

Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck!