With a smile I couldn't resist
My heart wrapped in your fist
You saved my soul, Filled me up and made me whole
So many things I love about you
There's nothing I wouldn't do
I wish you could see what you mean to me
There is so much more that we could be
Whispers in the night a passionate love
Pushed me over love's edge with a shove
I need your caress, I need you to hold me in the darkness
I need you to hold me in your embrace
As the tears roll down my face
I need you to hold me tight
And hold me through the night
I never want you to let me go
It's something I need you to know
Every moment I fall more in love with you
Even with the pain you put me through
You saved my soul, Filled me up and made me whole
I thank god for letting me know you
And for every second that I spend with you
For I never know when you'll be taken away
I cherish every day
I know in my heart and in my soul
That you are THE ONE that makes me whole
Your the one who completes me
Trapped in the cage of life, you set me free
I love you my darling with everything that I am
Return to me my love if you can..
A contest entry
- March New Member's Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended April 6, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A wonderful poem packed with emotion and gratitude to someone dear to you. People can make a huge difference in our life and sometimes even save it. I enjoyed the read.
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Thanks =o) He did make a huge difference. So much a difference,we're to be married in a month and 2 days LOL. =o) thanks for commenting =o)
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A beautiful poem written about your fiance. I can tell you really love him and am sure you guys are really happy together. Thank you for entering this wonderful poem into our contest and I hope you're enjoying your time on the site
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Thank you. We're very happy and very much in love. Just short of 5 weeks from now we'll be married. I couldn't be happier.
Yes I'm enjoying AP. I really like it here.
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Thank you for entering.
Everyone needs to be loved... in life things don't always turn out the way we wish they would, it's how we deal with that, that will help us to move forward with a positive view of things, we also learn from the experience which will help us in the future.
Well done and thank you for entering the contest
~Katie~
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Thanks for entering
In life we need to be loved to feel whole and to have someones love complete you is a gift that does not cross our paths everyday.
A lovely sentiment and beautiful poem.
Let the ink flow and your fingers dance
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Thanks for the entry and welcome to the site!
It sounds as though you love this person very much, I hope they know how lucky they truly are. Thank you very much for taking the time to write for and enter our contest. Best wishes and welcome to AllpoetryDove
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Thank you for your kind comments. He does =o) he's marrying me in less then 2 months.. But I definitely feel I'm the lucky one.. He's one amazing human being =o)
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Thanks for your entry
It's wonderful when we find someone that completes us. Finding that soulmate it the best that can happen in a lifetime.
You have penned such beautiful emotions in this. I really enjoyed the read
Some of the rhyme was a bit forced but on the whole well done and welcome to AP
Gaylene
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Thanks for your kind comments =o) Its good to get feedback =o)
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