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Sitting On The Fence!

There you sit upon the fence of my existence,

still deciding whether to stay or leave.

You bide your time while I bid you to stay,

yet there you sit wondering where the

greener grass is, even as you hate green.

The time has come and I must hasten your

decision by deciding to paint my fence.

You may not longer straddle here for the

gate is now open to one who knows already

how green my grass is.

Marjorie Joyce Leslie

03/09/07

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  • S-j
    January 31, 2009
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    i loved it, a great powerful write...and thank you for your coments on my poem its very kind of you


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 30, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!

    One cannot wait for one who will never be there. We find that true love is where there is heart open and true reaching out to us.


  • sherry-lee
    March 25, 2007
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    some decisions are difficult to make..and yours was made for you - and you conjured the courage and the strength to follow it through..congratulations.. i hope you were able to find a peaceful centre...


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    March 16, 2007
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    Nice. I love strong poems that make a clear statement. Glad you kicked the bum off the fence. lol

    Thanks for your comment on The Gift. Glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're doing well these days.

    Mark


  • panegyric ink
    March 14, 2007
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    i agree, very powerful in verse. overall, a fantastic write i have to say!!!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 9, 2007

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    Powerfully Versed!

    I'm feeling this poem, and I can understand you wish for a real man to take the stand..I see his pondering thoughts roam of dreams that are not your own. You paint your beautiful fence sweet soul, and await for the right knight to mend you whole. Maybe reading into this, but hey, I'm reading you all the same. All the best my friend in this contest, you rock! Much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • Lavender Butterfly
    March 9, 2007
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    Such meaning and profoundly expressive.

    Thanks for sharing... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.

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