It is not
idle distraction
When I dare
to venture
into the unknown
Seeking
what my soul must
know
The answers
are without reserve
I have to walk
paths set on
different stones
My
perspective
on life
may be altered
By
the INTENSE calling
of the Father
I've set myself
under
His wings
to taste
the sweetness
of life eternal
© Debby Sorensen Carlson
reworked 3/09/2007
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great rhyme and message. thanks for the comment..
you have sort of a reversed wording that works well.
one comment. i've set myself? i'm seated beneath his...
this is a lovely poem.
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Rusty
Thank you so much ! God bless, Debby
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this is quite a nice write annd i agree with poo... "I have to walk paths set on different stones" is also my favorite line though this line seems to stick a bit for me (might just be me too) "The answers searched for are without reserve" the for re part esppeciially anyways nice write
love ad light,
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Blaze..
Thank you ! I appreciate you reading my work and commenting.. As to the stick..lol.. Well, it seemed to be the best stick at the time..lol. Blessings to you. Debby
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Nicely done
a nice tribute to the Father and how his will should guide us.
"I have to walk paths set on different stones" is my favorite line
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Nursey
Thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed this. God Bless. Debby
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Oh my what a wonderful write..
My perspective on life may be altered
By the intense calling of the Father
I've set myself under His wings that
I may taste the sweetness of life eternal
So very beautiful
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Asdzaa
Thank you so much ! Blessings. Debby
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ahhh almost forgot the material.
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Smiling !!
Thank you so much for your sweet reply and the material..lolol.. God bless. Debby
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A ship in a bottle set sail
Serenity is so sweet yet so dark in its absence. For light comes from within and so is the path ahead. I loved every bit of this write. Such power and wonder into a mind to-which may not be so found as yours. You give hope and light into a retrospect, yet modernly necissary truth.
I feel life is smiling upon you, smile back. =)
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Intensity of Peace
Is exactly what this exquisite piece conveys, darling sister. As you state so well, there is hardly a better or more peaceful place to be than to walk God's path beneath His sheltering wings, other than to be in heaven to bask in His magnificent presence. "Come, Lord Jesus, come!"
Now, I am certain you know this ought to appear in one of the TSaS broadcasts!
Much love and hugs, SisB♥n
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Peace is Mine
Hiya my Bonnie.. you are more than welcome to use this as needed. Amen to the come Lord Jesus, come !! Love ya oodles and bunches and more.. d
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Exceptional piece yu have penned here my friend. There is a very strong family tie here that you hasve penned in your words that are full of strength and wisdom. It was atrue pleasure to read.r
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Thank you so very much ! God Bless. Debby
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A very deep piece! Our Father in Heaven may lead us into deep waters to learn lessons, it is our faith in him that sustains us to do his will, which is not always what you might anticipate. Well crafted! Really great job on this poem!
Love & Light
Debbera
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Thank you Debbera.. I spell mine Debra. I appreciate your comments. Very true that we do not always venture where we thought we'd go.. Many times, God has a much different plan. ANd yes, faith in HIM and HIS will for our lives.. leads us on many an adventure. Many blessings. Debby
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Debbie, I left you a long comment on this and somehow I was shot right off the sight... but I wanted to tell you how beautifully written this was... the part that touched me was "I have to walk paths set on different stones", yes a path uniquely ours. I've learned over the years, as you pen so well in the ending, is surrendering under his wing and putting it in His hands brings such peace... again, a beautiful spiritual piece, and all the best to you dear poet, Annie
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Thank you so much Annie. Surrendering to His will only brings joy. God Bless.. Debby
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I liked it, it kind of made me think that were all on a path into the unknown. Wich may turn good for some but bad for others.
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Thank you so much.. It just depends on who is leading your path.. Blessings. Debby
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There is no better place to be than under His wings and following His intense calling. Some may think it is a fearful thing, but in truth it is the most peaceful of places to be - the venturing into the unknown.
This is a beautiful poem Debby. I love you lots and lots. - jo
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Thank you so much Jo. It is a peaceful place.
And, I love you too so very much. d
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