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Home Is Where The Hatred Is

Slit open your wrists and bleed out your lies,

You condescending parasites i've grown to despise.

Die,for your fucking wretched judgments.

A contest entry

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  • bitter scarecrow
    March 11, 2007
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    truely 3 amazing lines


  • MissStranger
    March 11, 2007

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    this was amazing!if you would have not used this background plus the red letters I wouldn have missed it's dark nature for sure I really enjoyed the manner of revealing emotions through sensations though i've read even darker pieces before yet this one has that cynic flavour which makes it quite special!well done!keep up and be creative!


  • Lj-
    March 10, 2007
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    I like this. Very crude and angry.

    Very well done.


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