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The Connection is Silent

I said I Love you.

Your mouth repeats the words back to me but

your heart did not hear my words.

When the heart is deaf, the brain can mimic but

the actions do not lie.

The placement of your hands push me away as you

say I love you.

Your eyes never leave the TV screen as you

say I love you.

Your head never raises above the morning paper as you

say I love you.

When eyes cannot meet. thoughts of the heart cannot

be exchanged.

The connection is silent; silent as deafness.

Deafness of the heart and no attempt to learn sign language.

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  • onapedestalIstand
    May 6, 2008

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    this is sad the despret hope of finding love has become a must now..and i know in my heart that i shalt not find it..this happens a lot..later..thanks for entering..sarah


  • natalie92493
    May 29, 2007

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    I love how you wrote this. I keep reading it and feel how much more there is to it than what is written, how you can't just read it. You have to feel it. <3


  • silencethequestion
    March 9, 2007
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    I must say I've read this about 10 times now and everytime i read it, i felt connected with the emotions that you were portraying. this deserves 3 applauds and much more. you're a great writer. I deffinitly bookmarked this page. thank you for writing


  • silencethequestion
    March 9, 2007
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    wow you captured the emotions of silence between two lovers who no longer share love...beautiful.