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3 Line Poetry.




relive your life when you wished to die
close your eyes and don't wish for home
relish the dark it'll soon be but gone


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  • Lj-
    March 10, 2007

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    I really like the atmosphere of this. Just the feeling is so nicely conveyed with your words.


    Thank you for your entry,
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