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The Brad Pitt Dream

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I
dreamed
I went
to get
a drink
and
Brad Pitt
hit on
you

I
simply
paid and
cocked my
head to
see what
you
would
do

You
drooled
and
gawked
could
hardly
talk but
struggled
hard to
say

"I'm
sorry
Brad it's
Allan's
dream."
he
shrugged
and
went
away



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  • Topnotchsy
    August 24
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    Nice rhyme and rhythm on this humorous piece. I liked it a lot.


  • Ithica silver member
    January 9

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    He's very nice to look at but then again... looks ain't everything, so they say! He's better saved for secret dreams, provoked upon a silver screen... I got quite a smile out of this one!!!


  • Autumnpoet
    December 12, 2007

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    hehe I like the good sense of humour in it
    Poor Brad Pitt.Hes a good actor


  • amilicious
    December 10, 2007
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    thats funny

    i luv what the messages is here


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    May 10, 2007

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    Ha ha ha.. I love it. Brad Pitt is my all time favourite movie star for obvious reasons. This was great to read. Made me laugh!


  • Trixie08
    March 14, 2007

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    LOL!! I loved it and it's a great the picture isn't half bad either. LOL!! just kidding looks come and go but, a true heart stays forever. Great Write.

    • Allan Emery gold member
      March 14, 2007
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      I know you would choose me. Pretty sure... you would.... wouldn't you?

  • paullallady silver member
    March 10, 2007

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    first I must say that brad pitt may be some girls dreams but I never liked pretty boys!! okay that said, onto this marvelous poem. I love the imagery you used and the way you put this all in a dream. And then the ending was very funny. Oh if things would just turn out the way that I want them in my dreams!! great job, very cute!

  • myrataal silver member
    March 10, 2007

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    Oh Al!

    Who is Brad Pit?



    You wrote this so cleverly and as I know you by now, you did not even think: it simple rolled out in a (day)dream.

    I cannot think of a more original way to tell her you love her! And as for Brad: I think he will learn a lot by following your dream ...


    Love
    Always Myra





    • Allan Emery gold member
      March 10, 2007
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      Apparently he is a moviestar celebrity and an AL wannabe. I can not pull anything over on Myra, so I do not even bother. Sherlock says hi.

  • a woman to love
    March 9, 2007

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    lol...actually Brad doesn't do a thing for me , once in love and loved I would be completely faithful...excellent


  • Amera gold member
    March 9, 2007
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    Actually I’d say: “Come back to see me when you become half the man Allan is.”

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