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Thoughts to Words

I dont' know,
not about this.

This talking
my writing
i'm thinking.

Is that ok
my talking I mean.
Will you only get angry at me?

Can i speak my mind,
give me a few seconds please,
please just don't yell at me.

I want you to know....
I'm thinking....
you make me think, and wonder.

ERG! i can't get it,
i want to tell you my thoughts.

No, Please don't roll your eyes
stay with me i've almost got it...

NO, i dont' know!
not about this
just leave it alone
i'll think on it another day
when my mind is less unknown.

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it's been really hard for me to speak what i have been thinkin lately, like a block from thought to word was put up and idk how to express my thoughts and ideas.

Please tell me what you think

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  • MadisonRae
    March 10, 2007

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    as a very wise person once said to me (flightless)

    "Language is just a formality"


    so don't stress about it too much? Our thirst for knowing the answers and reasons for everything on this planet will never be quenched and though it's honorable to seek the solutions, it's silly to spend all your effort on it. Keep up the thoughts. love ya.

    Madison

  • emLeejo
    March 9, 2007

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    *Applaud*

    I liked it and can totally and completely relate to it, i understand what you mean i loved it though it was awesome. ur a genious at writing!