As we christen the new teen queen, we see that we are just helping to cause the disorders of anorexia and bulimia,
when we should be trying to help.
A contest entry
- Three AMAZING lines by Lj-.
340 points, ended March 11, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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how true that is. x] its sad how anorexia has become the new teen trend, i mean everyone wants a chance to be famous and be in the spot like and we look at the ones who are in it & they are all skinny as ever but they are so beautiful so its tempting to stick your finger down your throat & tempting not to eat a thing during the day.. good luck in the contest!
*Toxic-Beauty*
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This is good. I like the thoughts here.
However, you have two lines here, so I suggest you break up one line to make this three lines long.
Thank you for entering.
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i took your advice and edited it, i hope its ok now.
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Ahh, yes I like it more now.
Thanks,
And
Good luck in the contest!
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babeh
you make an AMAZING point here
I have often pondered on the thought myself
and yet..
I still dont know a reason for why that is
your amazing<3
Kat -
hmmm, please feel free to dq tis, i kno its terrible.
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