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Dual Dimensions

Missing image
Within a silent split second
colorful confetti reflects a
kaleidoscope of mosaic dreams

A collection of infused impulses
exploding through cemented
caverns once haunted with
disorganized vines wrapped
around selective secrets
suppressed

Euphoria erupts into flecks of
fascination with ebbing tides of
emotion transcending a time-lapse
of perplexed paradise and melancholy
memories over riding impinged
imperfections

A dual dimension of glimpses
whisper lingering limits of
resolution to a mind freed and
now comfortably connected with
each side in serene reflection and
humbled tranquility

Joined in mind, body, and spirit
as one~

Author notes

In the blink of an eye...
everything can change.

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  • loveisthemoment
    April 9, 2007
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    Nice job. I like it! Good luck.
    Love always,
    ~GC


    • zochit2me gold member
      April 10, 2007
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      Thank you for your kind comment of Dual Dimensions. It is one of my favorite pieces. Glad you stopped by to read
      Becky


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 19, 2007

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    Wonderful imagery in this piece, you have done well to capture so much within, great job

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen


  • tawk gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    Wow what wonderful imagery and emotion! Just a wonderful write, and good luck in the contest


  • paullallady silver member
    March 10, 2007

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    What an amazing piece of poetry you have penned here. This is beautiful and such vivid imagery. You captured the picture perfectly in a way that does not just coincide with the picture but enhances it.
    great job.


  • aliceramone
    March 9, 2007
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    Wow! great use of alliteration and imagery here...the ending was superb...rock on Becky!

  • Rowan gold member
    March 9, 2007

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    Wow..and whoa. I love the alliterations, the wisdom of these metaphors, excellent work.
    Kathleen


  • JoyfulWriter
    March 9, 2007

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    I believe you have got this right on the money! Absolutely amazing what you can get from a picture! You are so awesome, SIS! Smiles, Terry


  • StarEyes
    March 9, 2007

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    This has left me speechless. I have read it three times now, and still have no idea how to comment! LOL. I think you did a great job on it, none the less. Best of luck in the contest! Keep that wonderful pen flowing!!!!

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