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Stop Me from Killing Me

i wait here
talking to no one
the blood on my white dress
is mine
My mind is scream at me
i know i cant do anything more
i want you to stop me
from killing me
i cant take this anymore
the razor pulls
at my skin at night
killing me
a little more at a time
my friends only see crazy
i tried to stop
but my mind is gone
i am lost
i know i need help
stop me from killing me
.............again

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  • EmilyNicole
    March 9, 2007

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    hmm
    I thought this was very good, it showed lots of emotion. I really like how you incorporated the picture too =]