You love her, but not me
it seems entirely unfair,
but it's quite pitiful actually
that you don't even care.
If I changed my name
would you notice my face?
I'm sick of this game
without caring, love, or grace.
I wish you would love me
I wish it so hard,
but it's never meant to be
so I am torn apart.
There's no life for me
I just have to accept,
that no one will be
mine forever, so I wept.
I wish you knew
just how I feel,
your blessed blue eyes
are the reel.
I wish you would love me
I wish it so hard,
but it's never meant to be
so I am torn apart.
You pull me into
your everlasting gaze,
and my mind goes askew
so my heart is ablaze.
I feel alive when I'm when I'm with you
I can't even express,
how awlful and anew
I feel in distress.
I wish you would love me
I wish it so hard,
but it's never meant to be
so I am torn apart.
I wish...
[[that someone cared]]
I wish...
[[I wasn't so despaired]]
I wish...
[[these tears would go away]]
I wish...
[[that you loved me anyway]]
I wish you would love me
I wish it so hard,
but it's never meant to be
so I am torn apart.
A contest entry
- depressed by serenity silvermoon.
450 points, ended April 4, 2007, 39 entries
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okay so this one isnt bad.... you should change the synopsis though right?
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didnt u ALREADY read this and ALREADY comment??
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ya.... so...... your never on so i need something to free my boredom.... and then your poems always give me more things to say....
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o...have fun with that.
I SO HAPPY WE ON SWIM TEAM TOGEVER!!
yes, i meant to spell together wrong...
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Thank you for your contest submission, I do need to ask you review the rules and edit your submission appropriately. Please IM me and let me know this has been done, thank you.
This write touched a note within me as it echoes the way I felt when I lost my first husband to a so-called friend of ours. I mourned him for almost 25 yrs, but then finally found a love that surpassed even that one. I hope that you find the same, without the length of time it took me
I feel that you portrayed this emotional time very well in here, Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e * 
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this was a great poem sad but great and you are a great poet and i had fun reading this and i hope you had fun wrighting this great poem thanks for sharing and God Bless you and keep you 4 ever and always sign: dianna lee green aka serenity lynn silvermoon
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thanx 4 the clappy dudes
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AWWWWWW! THATS SO CUTE!!!!
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u better not tell ANY1 i wrote this 4 ben...u will die a horrible death or a huge fly will come in through ur window and smother u with its wings...then we'll see whos laughing!!
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YOU CANNIBIL!
YOU DO NOT EAT PEOPlE! IT DOES NOT SOLVE ANYTHING! HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF SOMEONE ATE YOU? -
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...i wouldnt be able to feel my arm anymore that 4 sure...
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