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- Under the Influence -

 

 

Dilated pupils perpetrate -under the influence-
by an unknown substance found in recipient,
needle injected with formaldehyde confirmed.





















 

 

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 11, 2007
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    Always remember that smell of this liquid when disecting frogs and other such creatures in science labs at school or at the university. One never forgets this, or the feel of it on your hands for any length of time. Interesting write.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    Dang, that would be horrible!!

    Nothing to smile about for sure.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • Lj-
    March 10, 2007
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    I like it. It has a strong-ness to it.


    Thank you for entering,
    Best of luck!




  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    March 9, 2007
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    Wow! Very strong and powerful write! Wow! All the best in the contest!


  • penman gold member
    March 9, 2007
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    Excellent

    So amazing love. Very vivid for three lines. Good luck in the contest.

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