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Making Angels

 

the nineteen inch mustad hook splintered through the skin

an artist must make the perfect puncture marks

when threading on angel wings

A contest entry

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  • TheCrazyBeautiful
    March 12, 2007
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    I'm finding this inspirational. I like it, for being three lines.


  • Brandon Ashley
    March 11, 2007
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    great write

    My vote is you won. But maybe i'll take 2nd


  • Lj-
    March 11, 2007
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    I read over this again, is "mustad" intentional? It's not a word.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 10, 2007
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    This was awesome indeed definately agree this was just lovely. Best of luck to you,
    Vsutton

  • Lj-
    March 9, 2007

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    This is so great. I love it. So very interesting and unique.

    "When threading on angel wings,"
    I loved that.



    Thank for entering,
    Best of luck!





  • Hell In Harmony
    March 9, 2007

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    AHH
    short
    and SOOO
    beautifully done
    God forbid if you do anything other than gr8
    in this contest
    <3 loved this
    Kat


  • poet007
    March 9, 2007
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    Good job


  • bird-mad girl
    March 9, 2007

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    wow.

    talk about stealing my breath away.

    I find myself malfunctioning and not being able to express how beautiful this was and how much I love this. its very frustrating!

    you've composed so much emotion and imagery through just THREE lines! only poeple with TRUE TALENT could EVERY paint such flawless beauty.

    this piece was perfectly ripe and just astounding.


    I think we need to make babies together

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