the nineteen inch mustad hook splintered through the skin
an artist must make the perfect puncture marks
when threading on angel wings
A contest entry
- Three AMAZING lines by Lj-.
340 points, ended March 11, 2007, 32 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I'm finding this inspirational. I like it, for being three lines.
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great write
My vote is you won. But maybe i'll take 2nd
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aw thanks
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I read over this again, is "mustad" intentional? It's not a word.
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Oh, yes I see. Never heard it before.
Sorry for the confusion, thank you for clearing that up.
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you probably have to fish a lot to know ... I bet you aren't the only one but were the only one to ask
haha.
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lol
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This was awesome indeed definately agree this was just lovely. Best of luck to you,
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This is so great. I love it. So very interesting and unique.
"When threading on angel wings,"
I loved that.
Thank for entering,
Best of luck!
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AHH
short
and SOOO
beautifully done
God forbid if you do anything other than gr8
in this contest
<3 loved this
Kat -
Good job
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wow.
talk about stealing my breath away.
I find myself malfunctioning and not being able to express how beautiful this was and how much I love this. its very frustrating!
you've composed so much emotion and imagery through just THREE lines! only poeple with TRUE TALENT could EVERY paint such flawless beauty.
this piece was perfectly ripe and just astounding.
I think we need to make babies together
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