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Gathering

A gathering all united
A multitude with one voice sings
Longing to be heard

A contest entry

Please be honest, whilst stroking my ego is nice it does not help me grow as a writer. If you have any constructive criticism or positive suggestions on how to improve my work please let me know.

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  • Lj-
    March 9, 2007
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    This is good. I like the feeling here- very real.


    Thank you for entering,
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