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Three Lines Of Intent

I loath you so
I shall make your clothes
With a belt sander

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My first poem of such duration.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 11, 2007

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    Clothes might be rubbing the skin pretty hard after this I think. Sentiments come through loud and clear in these three lines.


  • Wandika gold member
    March 10, 2007
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    I see the intent!


  • Lj-
    March 9, 2007
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    This is so random. I love this. After reading it, I just, in this order: stopped, smiled, looked around, and mouthed the words, 'wtf.' Sorry if that is offensive, but it's a compliment, I swear. So yeah, great write.


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