Spirits
of the Mesa
guiding lines, hold fast earth--
eternal path guides and gives us
magic.
Mystic
rocks in place through
all seasons line a way
believing in miracles of
nature.
Author notes
Inspiration of this made me at least have to try...
A contest entry
- Walk the Line by hoodoolover.
600 points, ended March 12, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very spiritual. I love what you 've said, and how you've said it.
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What a beautiful and mystical string of cinquains!
Very interesting content!
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Thank you so very much. It was inspired by another one of hoodoolover's contests!
I wish you the best in her new one and send you a
for going through what you went through and being able to share somehow.
m.
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this is excellent. I have a theory about these stones if you want to ask me after the contest. I was absolutely thrilled by this photo and your cinquains complement it so well.
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Sometimes, Micha, I think rocks are the footsteps of truth, at least in metaphor. I may think about this a little more and come back to it, because I believe in miracles. love, ~K
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Oh, Karen, thank you!
Yes, I have to believe in miracles, even small ones and thank you for this...
love,
michele
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I really love this, I do feel this area is a bit magical, so this goes quite well with the theme for me, thanks very much for entering!
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Thank You so much for the challenge and for the photo and for encouraging me to dive in.
And thank you for your kind and special comment, means much these days,
All the Best,
michele
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beautifully penned. I like the cinquain form you've used here. Very fitting of the picture. Well done.
Rory
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, Grazie
michele
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