shy
coming
steadily
out of my shell
writing and meeting
new people to inspire
a better way of thinking
eventually feeling good
enjoying finally being free
my wilderness years, nearly forgotten
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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PERFECT!!!!
Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!
BRAVO This is beautiful.... what a insight you have given of yourself..... honest and deep....
maybe shy but you are releasing yourself well done...
writing and meeting
new people to inspire
a better way of thinking
beautiful lines reflecting a beautiful soul
well done
goodluck
Tracey


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Very creative of you. I'm glad your coming out of your shell because I really enjoyed this write. Keep up the good work Dear!
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Thank you x
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