Furiously and with fierce force,
brutally she battles the borscht.
Consumes the spiced soup in earnest,
ignites her taste buds like a furnace.
She eats with zealous enthusiasm
until her stomach begins to spasm.
With no amount of subtlety
her insides growl, grim and bubbly.
They rage like a violent tempest,
rebuke the soup, clearly unimpressed.
Like a seasoned enemy legion
the borscht attacks her nether region.
She suffers through, but then can say
"I'll have the borscht again on Wednesday."
Author notes
Word Bank:
borscht
enthusiasm
earnest
subtlety
tempest
legion
Wednesday
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Learned a new Word
Had to look it up. Can't say as I have ever had it, except in your words.)thats good enought for me)
Joe -
definitely an enjoyable poem to read!!!
definitely fun, i agree!! my brother loves the stuff. i like it it, but don't have a craving like he does. I really loved the flow of this very much, and the meter was as perfect as it gets!!!!
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Quite the unusual word bank, but thiswas fun to read and the rhyme wasn't forced. I have to applaud this. (I like borscht) Lots of creativity here.
-Jake
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You rock! I need a little time to write mine, but I'll post the contest anywhere between tonight and this Sunday. Thanks are in order again.
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