Hit me, Punch me, Kick me, Squeeze me
Yell and scream you hate me
And say Rayvon why'd you leave me
Tell me I betrayed you, and showed you no sympathy
Tell me to go away because I have no chance you
Let me know your mom was mad because I up and left you
Tell me I'm not welcomed and I can't come back
But in the end of these words
Fall back because you're tired, let me hold once again...
For Love I Have Desired..
Name: Rayvon Grayson
Email Address: yourstrulyme@tmail.com
Private Voicemail for comments: 347 417 5616
My Site: http://hipalbum.com/?YOURSTRULYSC
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You know, Its really human not to know what you want ever! Especially if you are a women. I would know. I don't know one thing about men though =[ no matter how hard I try to read them.They arn't a palm.
Your really real with your writing, I think its really based around your life real personal all the time. Of course I could be wrong, My core is in my soul, that's what keeps me writing and sharing with others. See if anyone in the world can relate to what your going through that exact feeling at the same time! Heh its real emotion. But at the end of everyday you have to like yourself to want to go on to the next. =]
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Wow, that was so beautiful. I am always in awe of the growth that you continue to show Ray. I'll have to send you an email since it looks like you haven't been on the site in a while. Miss talking to you, lil' bro. Once again I'm feelin' like a proud mom. LOL. You killed this piece. It is so relatable and true. I LOVED IT. Send me an IM sometime. Later. - cgirl0410
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its been a long time big head but you always gettin deep as a fuck wit ur poems.... its gravy thou cuz i like to c ur heart on paper (well screen) you da shit and you know it!! keep it pimpin and write more you got to big 4dis site remember where u came from and dont go commercial!!!! well i gotz ta go so luv ya big head and i miss ur poems!!!! PEACE
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Wow, this is amazing. It's almost refreshing to read a different point of view since I've been on the other side of the matter many of times. You are really growing as a writer and I can see your growth just by reading your newest pieces.
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Profound
The wonderous relief of love, unrequited or shared, is a powerful thing.
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