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Sleepless Nights

Sleepless nights I stayed awake
Wondering waiting for that touch
Countless wonders seem to sing
I lost him the one I love
In the world I can't betroth
Another one that was all he was
number one
no other one
His I shall not spare to speak
Even if it makes me weak
I shant want to hear the word
From his lips upove
Silently he slipped away
Killed by him the one
He worked so hard
and yet strove for more
Now all I have is Headband and picture
Of my once beloved Warrior and Ninja

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  • Angierie
    March 16, 2007
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    WOWIE!!
    That hits home.

    Awesome job!


  • OnyxtheForsaken
    March 13, 2007

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    wow amazing write! i love this piece, very, concentrated with emotion. short and sweet and different with the fact that you decided to do it about warriors. Well done and good luck!