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Cheating

I want to hurt you like you hurt me,
I wanna stab your heart and make you bleed.
I won't say I am sorry because I'm not ok,
and I won't go on because I am not that way.

You will pay for what you did,
you sun of a bich you made me feel stupid.
I was blind through out my eyes,
I caught you cheating, I tell no lies.

The blood that surrounded me was my own,
and now I lay peacefully under stone.
I wouldn't take back the things that I did,
all because of that certain person that made me feel stupid.

I have been having a really hard time with things and my friends now are not always there for me. please please please tell me what you think.

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  • ashley21
    May 23, 2007

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    really good!!!!!

    I hope you didnt get cheated on!!! i really hope nott. But that is a really good poem seriously i really liked itt!! i dont have very good poemss but you do! keep writing id like to see more:]