I CUT BECAUSE I LOVE YOU
I CUT BECAUSS I CARE
I CUT BECAUSE I KNOW YOUR CHEATING AND YOUR NOT REALY THERE
I CUT TO SEE THE BLOOD
I CUT BECAUSE YOU LIE TOMY FACE
I CUT BECAUSE I CANT SPRAY YOUR EYES WITH A BOTTLE OF EXTRA STREGNTH MASE
I CUT BECAUSE I KNOW YOUR LYING
I CUT BECAUSE YOU SEE ME CRYING
I CUT BECAUSE THE PAINS IS NICE AND ICANT MAKE YOU PAY THE PRICE
I ALWAYS CUT AND YOU KNOW I DO
I CUT MY ARM ONE FOR ME AND ONE FOR YOU
I CUT BECAUSE I DONT TRUST YOU
I CUT BECAUSE I STILL LOVE YOU
I CUT BECAUSE YOUR A STUPID BITCH AND ALL THE PAIN YOU MAKE I REALY MISS
I MISS A REASON TO CUT
I NEEDED A REASON TO DIE
I WANTED A WAY TO GET RID OF THE PAIN WITHOUT MAKING MYSELF CRY
I GUESS THEY MENT IT WHEN THE SAID LOVE IS PAIN AND PAIN IS LOVE
A contest entry
- Murder by Blossom.
350 points, ended May 3, 2007, 20 entries
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1600 points, ended April 25, 2007, 57 entries
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400 points, ended May 18, 2007, 23 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I liked this write alot. the emotion and strength of the hurt is so strong and overwhelming. I think that tehe last line kinda ruins the whole thing, it seems off beat and doesnt fit.
great write
thanks for entering and goodluck -
hmm.. I really liked it. Believe me I know how it is to feel like this over someone. Try to stay away from the basic cat-sat-hat rhyming. Overall very good way of letting your feelings out. Thanks for entering.
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aww....you shouldnt cut over someone like that. good poem....i really like it.
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