We close our eyes when we experience some of the greatest things life has to offer:
Kissing, dreaming, crying, dying…
Kissing is lip-on-lip
Ecstasy of the mouth, what a trip!
Dreaming, that evasive friend
Do you dream until night’s end?
Crying, emotions let out
Sometimes, when I cry, I shout
When you die, you are released into His arms
No longer in need of mascara and charms…
So next time you cry, kiss, or dream
Don’t let your mind wander and ream
Think of what I’ve said
Hold on to your sanity instead
We close our eyes when we experience some of the greatest things life has to offer:
Kissing, crying, dreaming, dying…
Please tell me what you think
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i loved this, this was awesome how you pieced your words together i loved
Crying, emotions let out
Sometimes, when I cry, I shout
When you die, you are released into His arms
No longer in need of mascara and charms…
So next time you cry, kiss, or dream
Don’t let your mind wander and ream
Think of what I’ve said
Hold on to your sanity instead
this poem is awesome keep writing!!!
~Ashley~<3 -
what i was going to say has already been said in the previous comments... wow
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Lovely. That is it in a nutshell...Good words...Keep our eyes wide open for the lovely things you mention..For it is living...And lets' live..There is so much to live for...friends, love,the beautiful things to see...Sure there are the bad things but lets' look for the good...A well written piece dear poet..You are moving along in leaps and bounds, and always have something very worthwhile to read! Bravo!
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I love what I see. Kissing, crying, dreaming, dying, Does anything else truly matter? This is a solid write.
Wonderful!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker who lost all
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ooo nice, i like this verrrry much.
'We close our eyes when we experience some of the greatest things life has to offer'
beaautiful.
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so true
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wow i like this one its so true. is that your tattoo? i like it
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I really like this view on life. I've never thought about it like that. Interesting write.
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i wish i could get my poems published and maybe move on to lyrics, but.....moneymoneymoney!
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True and amazing
BR, I'm very proud of you. This rings so true, I hear music along with your write...I keep feeling that your writes are words to be enhanced by music.
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