Precocious as a tender child
Precious as can be
Princess Elf gone slightly wild
Phenomenal to see
Psyche elegantly styled
Pure sensitivity
Play a while with me
Author notes
This poem is for Amera who is teaching me how to write passionately.
Pleiades style
This titled form was invented in 1999 by Craig Tigerman, Sol Magazine's Lead Editor. Only one word is allowed in the title followed by a single seven-line stanza. The first word in each line begins with the same letter as the title. I added a rhyming scheme of abababwhatever.
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so many emotions, from so little words. I loved it and this piece showcases your talent for writing. I just simply thought that this was beautiful and from the others this one included always holds something deeper from within it's words.
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You will find what you seek. If you look for bad in people you will find it. If you look for good in people you will find it. I just figured out that I only want to find the good, so that's all I look for.
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Very Lovely
A tender write, set in affectionate tone, favorite line... " Pure sensitivity "
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I love it! You did a great job with style, the meter and the background. The image is lovely showing your emotional affinity for elves or at least one elf.
Love,
Amera
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