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Broken Soul

Broken, Shatterd every peice
My soul is screaming for some release
I've been strong, stayed in the fight
Holding on enve on the darkest night
But now my strengtth is nearly gone
Becaue this battle has been so long
I've lost my faith and dreams again
My sole is trapped in this shameful skin
Mind taken prisoner by my bones
Kept inside all alone
Dark and cold no where to go
No courage now left to show
Tears fall down, wet my face
Hoping i'd never return to this place
But here i am once again
Batterd, broken torn apart
And yet you manage to save my heart

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  • CatQueen248
    July 22, 2008
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    I didn't know you were writing again. This was really good. I'm sorry that you were going through so much pain, but I'm glad James was there to make you feel better. A few spelling errors "shattered" and "piece" and "even" and "strength" and "Because" and "soul" and "nowhere" and "battered"