A bright light forms
all around me like a breeze
set in time to a ryhme
of a past we couldn't see
Completed circles set
in perfect harmony
the jester had his laugh
as you sat in front of me
Come forward and see
what you truly ought to be
you hide behind a broken dream
unknowing of what is to be
See me standing
above the tree
looking down
on what was me
You see no sadness
nor a gladness
you are mearly
in the scene
Lost within a world
inside your little head
fighting what you think you know
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~Me~
Author notes
I have no idea what I was writing. And it just stopped.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW! That was just really amazing. And deep. I quit writing for a long time. But I think Im gonna start back. Anyways. Reallly amazing! Stacey
You can email me at staceymichelle31@yahoo.co
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this was an interesting write. I have been away for a few days but now I have some time to get my reading done. keep up the great work.
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OMG, sis! That really does pack a punch here!
"Come forward and see
what you truly ought to be
you hide behind a broken dream
unknowing of what is to be"
Sounds a whole lot like me here. I've got way too many broken dreams and not knowing what else to do. I guess that's why were sisters.... Twins!
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Two Thumbs Up!
Wowza. You can really get lost in this poem. I love it when poems are actually intelligent and you can find many meanings according to who's reading. Great job on grabbing this attention of the reader. Very gripping.
Keep up the good work you have going on here.
Also, I love your face icon!
~~~~Creatress~~~~~~~
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