Simple mistakes have brought me here this day,
To find the words I could never say.
I must say I am no hero.
Words for you, remain zero.
A tangle of thoughts left,
From an empty theft;
I have no heart,
To depart.
A choke,
Woke...
Author notes
A bit of a challenge. Hope it's okay.
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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PERFECT!!!!
Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!
A challenge but you have done really well.....
What a wonderful insight you have given about yourself, so deep, you have looked inside, and given us the depths of your soul....
Very well done and your rhyme flow runs well
Goodluck
Tracey
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Thank you so much!
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