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I Cannot Forget

I cannot forget the days we once shared
Or each secret kiss whenever we dared
We use to dream of us lasting forever
With all our dreams coupled with laughter
Things use to seem so bright
Everything fit into place just right
I do not understand why you had to go
And what hurts most are the things I do not know
I miss you more and more each day
And I wish that you had made the choice to stay
But I guess dreams rarely come true
But I still hope for us becoming anew

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  • Godsaved
    April 24, 2007

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    Awww...

    well this was a well written poem man, seriously i liked it alot, it was short, but it had alot of meaning and emotion to it wonderful write


  • PoeticFlame
    March 10, 2007

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    OMG...I feel this way right now. I feel love more than ever for my first love and he has a bf! I'm so depressed and sad. Suicide crosses mind alot...