Love,
serene,
peaceful too,
these are the words
I'd like to describe.
There is so much more though,
fear...and...in..se.cur..ity,
dreams within my sad lonely soul.
If there was a way to tell you more,
I'd embrace it and share it with my all.
Author notes
well, i tried
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!
Firstly I want to thank you for entering my contest!!!!
What a wonderful insight into your soul.... So honest, you express so much feeling within those 10 lines...
I love the first 2 lines such a wonderful warm opening
Goodluck
Tracey
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Etheree needs to be 10 lines you have 11 lines put revised near title when adjusted
Tracey -
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sorry about that. long night. little sleep. i can remove this if you want as you helped me with it.
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