As
I turn
grey and get
older. I have
to say am getting
bolder, but I still am
just a silly man, one that
is seeking out his plan. A true
blessing in life is found, love from a
woman that makes things so grandly profound.
This perfect lady of unmatched beauty,
mystic design led to this cutey.
So I strive to get by each day,
all the words I longed to say.
Felt this way all my life,
want her as my wife.
Near yet so far,
yellow shines
from her
star.
Author notes
Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 ...syllables
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Silly man! You are so cutie and sweet. YELLOW all the way...for we all know it is the bright sunshiny color of the world.
Beautiful job!
I really love it.
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Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!
wow wow!!!!!!
What a beautiful write you have penned!!!
As
I turn
grey and get
older. I have
to say am getting
bolder, but I still am
just a silly man,
This is excellent although you age it does not stop you, you only become stronger....
your last lines are soo loving and heartwarming....
welldone
goodluck
Tracey
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needs to be 20 lines this is 21 lines
put revised near title when adjusted
Tracey -
Awwwww
My dear friend this is you to a tee. After spending many hours with you I could feel the words before I read them. It is your time to shine and love dear...silliness is strength at times. You did forget a few things though. Loving and loyal and true..never a truer friend have I had. Hugs and best of luck to you...just me
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