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Master of the Maker

With a scream I try to fight
Fighting the forcing of what you think is right
Forget this, it's hopeless
Your chains of hypocrisy bind our hands
Shackling millions out of hope and a chance to be free
Why can't they see what I see
You're the plague that corrodes their faith

In God's name you do things which make God obsolete
Your struggle for power and dominance ongoing
without cause but a greed for a future without rules
With out a structure except your own

Without love
Without hope
Without honor
Without happiness

Take away what holds us together, what makes us human
Our empty shells of being, that's what you like to see
No one dare question what they do not know
Your plan is almost complete

Take away what keeps us going, what gives us drive
With weakness no one will be strong enough to fight
No one can exert a struggle when the struggle is already killing them
You are certain you have won

Take away the pureness, make us disgusting and sick
We do your evil bidding without reason, without cause
This putrid stench radiates from within
You control us like puppets

With nothing left to make a difference we consume all
Everything good and wonderful has fallen to and consumed by
Hate, greed, and the Evil power that controls this world
It's ongoing, it's never ending

...it will all be over soon

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I guess this really doesn't have any particular form, but there it is anyway.

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  • XISeeHopeInYourEyes
    March 15, 2007
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    wow!

    This was so good! i liked it a lot and I can really see what you are trying to say! A friend once said to me "Beautiful and cold like Marble" And I think that this applies here! great job...keep it up! And get back on AIM so i can talk to u some more! lol
    luvs u
    ~Desi~