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Me(Etheree).Revised,

I
Am old
Ninety two
Walk with a cane
Lots of aches and pain
But my life still is great
I'm wed to the perfect mate
Daily hugs and kisses, true bliss
With mind clear, very witty and wise
Either in free verse or rhyme to poetize

A contest entry

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  • bethan-gaze
    March 10, 2007

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    Golly gosh! Not only have you written a delightful wotsitsname but you've put it to rhyme. I am not worthy ... this is great. And what you say within the lines is heavenly. Ah ...


  • Lyre-Bird-
    March 9, 2007
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    BRAVO BRAVO

    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!

    Excellent write about yourself .... 92 and still kicking..... you go boy....
    Sounds like you really enjoy life...

    well done
    goodluck
    Tracey


  • cafegroundzero gold member
    March 9, 2007

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    Mister Bill, I thankee good sir

    As you see, tis harder than meets the eye at first, but keep trying! As for me, I'll take a nap while I wait to see what lyrebird has in store for me. (Yikes!)


  • Lyre-Bird-
    March 9, 2007

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    In free verse or with rhyme to poetize is 9 syllables needs to be 10

    put revised near title when adjusted
    Tracey