Why do they run and kick and scream?
Why do they punch and kick and dream?
Because they are the kids
and I am in their ranks
We have fun and do whatever
and we don't care how much
we wear out eachother's banks!
Money, money, money, give me more!
I can't help it if I'm a shoe whore...
We are The Krazy Kidz and that's just how we roll
So if you wanna cross this teenage-bridge
you had better pay the toll...
Please tell me what you think
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i loved this, this is an awesome write, keep penning!!!!!
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I like it just sorta flowed. Me and my betchfaces are the same way
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nice work well done
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It is a finished work now..O.k.
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Weeeeeeeeeee....wee?
ha, lol, thnks beautiful!
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This one is very angry in it...and the excessive *bunny* in it is not too great....It needs to tone down in the anger and don't disrespect Mom...cuz I am a Mom Heh....You can revise it.."piss off" not great either....You just have to go to edit...and it shows your typed manuscript....you change it there...When you change it I will give you an applause..O.k.
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changed it.
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