Light
shines bright
warming hearts
caressing wounds
turning them to hope
that I might myself smile
in the darkness of my pain
gaining family along the way
hugs replacing the need for sobbing
love now flowing over my soul's desert.
Author notes
My expression of thanks for those who have become my family at AP. They have truly giving me more than I ever imagined.
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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what a great tribute to your loved ones...loved the structure, form and smoothness of the flow....Good job!
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Thank you so much for your kind remarks. Yes, they do mean so much to me.
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Precious-
One Precious verse You have penned and the Love shines like a beacon...
for all to see and cherish!
Loved this one!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Awww. Sweetheart, where would the love be without you.
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Such delightful warm feelings within this poem.
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Thank you for your usual wonderful comment.
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PERFECT!!!!
Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!
Such a beautiful tribute you have written for your ap family, I am sure your words will mean alot to them all......
congrads on perfectly creating a Etheree form poem
goodluck
Tracey
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It is so hard to think of me these days without thinking of them. I'm so thrilled you like my entry. Thank you so much.
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