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Greener grasses (Haynaku)

darkness
longs for
the morning's glory

the bright sky
longs for
closure

Author notes

first attempt....please criticise!

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  • cherche -d -ame
    March 11, 2007

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    thank you for attempting this for the first time. You did quite well indeed and even did a double oneBest wishes in the contest,
    reenie