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Hollywood Life

plastic noses
and mannequin poses

street of stars
and 250 thousand dollar cars

cameras and fans
fake boobs and spray-on tans

perfect teeth and colored hair
flawless legs without the use of Nair

Paris Hilton and Nicky, too
Holleywood snobs, unlike me and you

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isn't it awesome???

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  • vampire.lust.death
    November 22, 2007
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    yes a true and vary easy to see the images your good i like it


  • Forgotten Lilith
    October 2, 2007
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    yes, absolutely awesome


  • Something Obscene
    August 12, 2007
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    Too damn true.

  • cirque du soleil
    April 27, 2007

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    yeah, this poem is definitely awesome!
    you're right, most Hollywood Stars do seem artificial and snobby. though i guess there must be a couple of good ones out there somewhere
    i liked the lines
    plastic noses
    and mannequin poses
    great work


  • paullallady silver member
    March 10, 2007
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    This is really cute and so true about a lot of them. They just don't seem real, do they? and when we get an actor that does seem regular like us, they all make fun of them. Oh well, it is the way of life. they rhyme was terrific, great job with this.


    • SouthernSexGoddess
      March 13, 2007
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      Thanks so much...I wrote it because of the HW snobs and because my friend Teryl started a group called "Plastic Noses and Mannequin Poses"...you should join!


  • Inside and out
    March 9, 2007

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    I really like this poem. It is clever and creative and entertaining. Hollywood does give us plenty to write about. This is one fine example. Well done dear poet.


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    March 9, 2007

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    Awesome

    This write is awesome. I especially loved the third stanza Great write!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows


  • PlasticPrecious
    March 9, 2007
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    Lmao

    lol, this was funni and well-peiced together!
    good write and an awesome read!

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