When questions pile up and answers won't follow
The brightest of us begin to waver
So she put her love up for sale
But all the offers were hollow
"Take these words I'm giving
And I'll take you were we are all alone,
Just don't give your heart to mine for it is made of stone"
She's dancing with corpses
They are bringing down heavens gates
And she'll dance,she'll dance,she'll dance
Right on the threshold to the tomb of her own fate
And I say this now,
Because I hate to see her down
We are all unique,when alone
But we are all the same when confronted by the world
So open your eyes and set your mind
And reveal what is not known
"You can only say 'no' for so long
By the end of the night your pleasure will be mine,
We are so young,so passion is not a crime"
She's dancing with corpses
They are bringing down heavens gates
And she'll dance,she'll dance,she'll dance
Right on the threshold to the tomb of her own fate
And I say this now,
Because I hate to see her down
A contest entry
- Give me your very best! by Carly Pop.
450 points, ended April 3, 2007, 18 entries
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550 points, ended August 2, 2007, 43 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Such a thought provoking write. Wonderful imagery and emotions. Good luck and thanks for entering
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I love it!?! ^_^ Good job on this one!
Unfaithfully Your's
Of Blood and Tears
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this is really interesting and well written
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