I'm
A mom
an artist.
My spirit... strong.
Searching always,too.
Striving for my dreams, as
I also strive to build a
better life for my family.
I feel deeply for those around me;
from them, I learn and grow, through this journey.
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Revealing! Love the self admissions. I find it hard to speak of me. This is wonderful. I do feel your strength, and the fact that you love your children intensely. You heart speaks clearly here.
Excellent!
The best to you in this challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Beautiful ethereee LL- well done.......................................................speaks volumes and volumes about who you are.
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This speaks to the reader...and is so easy to relate to. I love the last two lines; rounds out the poem, but also shows how important it is to learn from each other. Great penning!
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Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!
BRAVO
So much expressed..... a mother is a 24/7 task alone, you really are a strong soul.... learning and striving wonderful qualities to have
I feel deeply for those around me;
from them, I learn and grow, through this journey.
I love your last lines, such caring expressions and yet learning and growing every step of the way
well done
goodluck
Tracey
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this was cool! i love how you push your emotion into the minds of your audience!
great write!
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put edit near title whenever you have adjusted the poem
Tracey
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spiritually strong is 6 syllables needs to be 4
better life for my family. I, is 9 syllables needs to be 8
Tracey
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