I
don't work;
been retired
twenty-five years!
Was an architect.
Designed government schools;
primary and second'ry.
Now I write poetry and prose,
have published some things I have written,
and now describe myself as a 'wordsmith'.
A contest entry
- 10 Lines About You (Etheree form) by Lyre-Bird-.
450 points, ended March 14, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!
A wonderful insight into your self you have given within this write....
Retirement that you really do deserve.....
and now describe myself as a 'wordsmith'
'wordsmith' - wow what a excellent description of your self
welldone
goodluck
Tracey
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http://www.wordscount.info/hw/syllable.jsp this is where I check syllable count
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put edit near title whenever you have adjusted the poem
Tracey -
primary and secondary is 8 syllables needs to be 7
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Lyrebird74
Illogical though it may seem, Brit/Aussie pronunciation is sec-on-dri three syllables!
Shenton
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