Fantasies,
silly dreams.
Love is unrequited.
Hay(na)ku
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, yes...been there a time or two, or three, or....
hope you have found/will find what you are looking for
Good poem..and very evocative..oh..and congrats on the trophy..well done
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well Im a little old now
though I wish I could feel this way again.....LOL....
thanks for commenting.....and the applause
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I love this!
What a wonderful poem!
I love that you associated infatuation and unrequited love with silliness. Kinda takes the sting out of it a little.
Great job! Best of luck in the contest, Mally!
Cris
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i like this a lot-soemthign i think most everyone can relate to. Nicely done, keepin the meaning yet done simply. good luck! pegelg
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thanks Mal for entering into this contest. It sounds almost as if you want to dismiss those dreams (silly dreams) but we do need them to sustain us. If there is nothing else-at least we can dream
Best wishes in the contest,
reenie
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Sometimes fantasies and silly dreams do result in requited love, Mally. So call me a dreamer.
Best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo
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Nice piece on the fantasy topic.Although this is true,it's still fun.~~Suseann
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